AICE Media Studies AS- Sherry, V

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     I took a week off of working on my magazine so I could focus primarily on editing my other blog posts. I recently took a look over my magazine, the feedback, and the edits I have made and I analyzed over everything and I realized there are no other contributions that I want added to my magazine.     I had some peers analyze my magazine again after having made the changes that I did and the only feedback that I received were compliments. One of the peers stated how they loved the color contrasting between the words and the background for the cover and content page. And another peer stated how they loved the alignment of the pictures and the body paragraphs on the feature article pages because it made the whole magazine organized and professional. They both concluded that the changes I had made were the best decisions I could have made and tied my magazine together.     After receiving the feedback that I did, and taking another full glance at ...

    After having received my peer review I was aware of the changes that I knew needed to be made to my magazine that were either mistakes I had made or critiques of what the readers may prefer in my article. And after having a chance to review all of the critiques and narrowing them down to the ones I will attribute to my magazine, I was able to do just that.       One of the editorial changes I made that was a clear mistake was the spacing of my body paragraphs and my pictures within my feature article. They were previously misplaced, off sized, and unaligned with the rest of the page and each other; I edited this by aligning the pictures and the body paragraph so they were all perfectly organized. I then made some suggestive editing to my cover and contents page by changing the subheadings on both pages to different colors and fonts so they stand out better on the pages. Another change I made was I moved my selling line down closer to my feature art...

     On Friday, the 29th of January, I presented my first version of my magazine. After having presented, I was able to get a lot of feedback from my peers on various aspects of my magazine. Some of the feedback I received varied from compliments, few mishaps, and possible changes just for a better layout. In this post I will be explaining the sum of my feedback, talking about the parts of my magazine that my peers enjoyed the most and the parts of my magazine that they feel could do with some editing.     Starting with the parts of my magazine that my peers enjoyed, they had a quite a few good things to say. First and foremost, I got a compliment on my cover page, mainly the picture on the cover page, which lead to multiple compliments on my pictures throughout the magazine. My pictures were said to be very nice and fit the placement of each section of my article nicely. I also got compliments on my color contrasts' in my magazine and how they correlate to my c...